Author Archives: Darrick Dean

Details, Details

I previously wrote on the importance of finding the right balance of details in a novel:

It’s true that too little detail is boring. Just as certain is that not allowing a story to breathe, to capture the reader and bring them in, is just as boring. It doesn’t take a lot of detail to paint a picture in the mind. A perception. A feeling. An immersive book doesn’t have to be 200,000 words long. Fewer and purposefully chosen words can ignite the reader’s imagination, draw them inside and propel them forward.

Novelist and professor James Hynes, in his course Writing Great Fiction, also implores writers to get your details right:

…evocative writing provides significant detail, but it doesn’t overwhelm the reader. The point is to draw something out of your readers, which you can’t do if you pour too much in. This is a tricky balance to get right, and beginning writers often have the most difficulty with it. Just as one common error among young writers is not providing enough detail, another…is to overcompensate by telling to much. Often, inexperienced writers will go on for several paragraphs about the appearance of a character or place when a few well-chosen sentences or words would have done just as well.

Finding the right balance of detail can allow your readers disappear into your book, or make your book disappear.

Categories: Fiction, Writing | Tags: | 1 Comment

Ending Badly

Russian playwright Anton Chekhov famously wrote:

Remove everything that has no relevance to the story. If you say in the first chapter that there is a rifle hanging on the wall, in the second or third chapter it absolutely must go off. If it’s not going to be fired, it shouldn’t be hanging there.

What he was referring to is that when writing, you better give payoff for whatever you set up in your story. Surprisingly, the failure to do this most often manifests itself in the endings of books or films. Years ago, I was reading a particular bestselling thriller that everyone was reading. It contained action and conspiracy and adventure, but then came the ending. “Is this it?” I asked myself. “People really think this is great?”

The author had all this build-up and expectations, so high that the ending was overshadowed. Perhaps he was hoping the rest of the story would compensate? Sales of the book seemed to vindicate the book, but when have we become so easily entertained that we overlook a poor ending?

Part of it may come from motion pictures. Blockbuster films jam the film with so many expensive set pieces and action sequences, the traditional slow burn to a climax is often nonexistent. When the big showdown does unfold, it isn’t so spectacular. It’s as if the film makers spent all their money already or didn’t bother thinking the end through as well as the previous acts. This doesn’t stop many of these films from being successful, but it can make others that do have a real climax a refreshing change.

Just as beginings are critical, don’t let your endings flounder. Don’t hope that the preceding chapters will make people overlook bad final pages. Maybe they will, but is that the standard you want to follow?

A great ending can also be a great beginning, but make sure the reader wants to read what you write next.

Categories: Books, Fiction, Writing | Tags: , , | 1 Comment

Starlight Bloggers Award

Nimmi nominated me for the STARLIGHT Bloggers Award (actually, a few weeks ago, I’m a bit behind, sorry Nimmi), an Awardcreated to highlight and promote Inspiring Bloggers. I still have to answer the questions and nominate some other sites, but I wanted to post this:

This Award is created to highlight and promote Inspiring Bloggers.

Rules for the award:

1. Nominate your 6 favourite bloggers!
2. Thank the giver and link their Blog to your post.
3. Answer the 3 new questions from your nominator given to you.
4. Please Pass the award on to 6 or more other Bloggers of your choice and let them know that they have been nominated by you.

Include the logo of the award in a post or on your Blog, please never alter the logo. Please don’t delete this note: the design for the STARLIGHT Bloggers Award has been created from Yesterdayafter is a Copyright image you cannot alter or change it in any way just pass it to others that deserve this award. Copyright 2015 © YesterdayAfter.com – Design by Carolina Russo

1. Who made you discover the starlight within you?
2. What would you say is your starlight gift to others?
3. What is the craziest thing you have ever thought of doing?
4. Do you believe in the Omnipotence paradox?

Thanks Nimmi!

Categories: Uncategorized | Tags: | 1 Comment

007 Doesn’t Hate Women

A few days ago, I wrote on people finding sexism everywhere they look in books. A common target of theirs is James Bond (both the original books and films). Taking it further, article after article has labeled Bond as misogynistic. It appears many people just like pretending to sound intelligent by repeating a big word they never looked up, nor have they thought too deeply about Bond.

First, misogyny is the hatred or dislike of women. Bond does neither (more on that in a moment). What people have done here is equate objectification with dislike or hatred. This is a stretch and a misuse of words. Why, would most people, objectify something they hate? Even Bond actor Daniel Craig misused the word, but his costar, Monica Bellucci disagreed that Bond was a misogynist.

Bond never abuses women, only hates the ones trying to kill him, and his conquests are always willing participants. Professor Thomas A. Shippey, in his course on influential characters in literature, Heroes and Legends, reveals that Ian Fleming’s original 007 books reveal a Bond who is:

…gallant, even protective [of women] in an old-fashioned way. Nearly all the women in Bond’s life have been badly treated [by others]…Tracy and Vesper, the two women Bond marries or means to marry, both have hidden sorrows or secrets…He doesn’t physically abuse women, and he’s capable of falling in love. He shows concern for some of his partners, and although they sometimes dump him, he doesn’t dump them.

The films, especially the recent series, do reflect what the novels established. So why, historically, does every woman he meets “disappears or is disposed of before the start” of the next book or film? This where the sexist-misogyny-slinging experts have refused to think to deeply: Why is Bond so scarred? What has made him the way he is? The books, and the Daniel Craig films, have explored these reasons. Being a spy, the past is slowly revealed, and perhaps never fully, but losses like Vesper’s betrayal and death certainly have an obvious impact.

Bond is an easy target: Giant blockbuster films, full of barely believable escapades, a spy who always gets the girl. On even a cursory inspection, however, that man is flawed, has a history and a feeling or two.

In other words, a human after all.

Categories: Books, Fiction | Tags: , , , , , , , , , , | Leave a comment

Living Like Renegades

Books aren’t the only place where writers inspire. Music has done the same for many ages in its own unique way. Some songs are quickly forgotten, others should not be:

“Rise” by Skillet on revolution:

Rise and revolution!
It’s our time to change it all,
Rise and revolution!
Unite and fight, to make a better life!
Everybody one for all,
Sound off, this is the call, tonight, we rise!

…In a world gone mad,
In a place so sad!
Sometimes it’s crazy
To fight for what you believe!
But you can’t give up…

“Uprising” by Muse on truth and control:

…They’ll try to push drugs
Keep us all dumbed down and hope that
But we will never see the truth around
Another promise, another scene, another
Package lie to keep us trapped in greed
With all the green belts wrapped around our minds
And endless red tape to keep the truth confined

They will not force us
They will stop degrading us
They will not control us
We will be victorious

“Wake Me Up” by Avicii on finding your place:

Feeling my way through the darkness
Guided by a beating heart
I can’t tell where the journey will end
But I know where to start…

So wake me up when it’s all over
When I’m wiser and I’m older
All this time I was finding myself, and I
Didn’t know I was lost…

I tried carrying the weight of the world
But I only have two hands
Hope I get the chance to travel the world
But I don’t have any plans
Wish that I could stay forever this young
Not afraid to close my eyes

“On My Own” by Ashes Remain on not going at it alone:

There’s gotta be another way out
I’ve been stuck in a cage with my doubt
I’ve tried forever getting out
On my own

But every time I do this my way
I get caught in the lies of the enemy
I lay my troubles down
I’m ready for you now

BRING ME OUT
Come and find me in the dark now
Everyday by myself I’m breaking down
I don’t wanna fight alone anymore!

“Renegades” by X Ambassadors on living life with meaning:

Long live the pioneers
Rebels and mutineers
Go forth and have no fear
Come close the end is near…

All hail the underdogs
All hail the new kids
All hail the outlaws…

It’s our time to make a move
It’s our time to make amends
It’s our time to break the rules
Let’s begin…

Living like we’re renegades

Categories: Uncategorized | Tags: , , , , , | Leave a comment

Discovering Columbus

Last year I asked, Should Columbus be Celebrated? It is a controversial question, since that day in 1492 meant the eventual end of many cultures in the Western Hemisphere. The other side of the sword is that new cultures arose from those escaping the Old World. In all likelihood, using Columbus as the poster child for all that did go wrong is not fair.

One has to dig deep into many studies of the man to even begin to unravel his mind. He was secretive, put himself in the middle of politics and was the target of his enemies. All of this, and the distance of time, have made any study of the explorer a difficult one.

As Carol Delaney argues in Columbus and the Quest for Jerusalem, acquiring wealth for the Spanish crown was not his primary goal. He sought allies and money for one more Crusade to the Holy Lands. Religious motivation has been suggested before, but by writers couching everything in esoteric conspiracies. It has also been suggested he knew the New World existed. As plausible as that is, most of what we know seems to point elsewhere. Beyond that:

…Delaney depicts her subject as a thoughtful interpreter of the native cultures that he and his men encountered, and tells the tragic story of how his initial attempts to establish good relations with the natives turned badly sour. Showing Columbus in the context of his times rather than through the prism of present-day perspectives on colonial conquests reveals a man who was neither a greedy imperialist nor a quixotic adventurer, but a man driven by an abiding religious passion.

Contrast this to the later Conquistadors who were made up of mercenaries and those looking to set up their own little kingdoms of wealth. In Kim MacQuarrie’s The Last Days of the Incas, we get the distinct impression that most of these men cared little about religion other than some unconvincing attempts to use it to justify their actions.

Columbus’ life didn’t begin and end on his first voyage to the new world. It was his fourth that would unfold like an epic film and perhaps best give insight into his motivations. Martin Dugard’s The Last Voyage chronicles mutiny, shipwreck, storms and war. A far different tale than the simple one told in schools. Only by going beyond the simple tales, do we actually begin to peel away the misconceptions and mystery. That curtain will probably never be completely pulled away and certainly Columbus is imperfect and flawed like us all. And maybe that’s the lesson this Columbus Day.

Anyone can change the world, for better, or for worse.

colum

Categories: Books, History, Native Americans | Tags: , , , | Leave a comment

Biblichor

From Prajakta Athavale:

biblichor1

Categories: Books | 2 Comments

Finding Sexism in Fiction…A Modern Witch Hunt?

There seems to be a trend of searching through books and find reasons to label them sexist. For example, The Lord of the Rings is sexist because there aren’t enough women characters and the ones that are there aren’t doing enough important things. This leads me to ask:

What is the proper woman character quota for novelists? Is the role of someone like Eowyn fighting the Nazgul at a critical moment in the story not important? If a book or film is overwhelming centered on women, is that sexist?

See the overreach of certain critics? We also can suspect that some are looking to push an agenda by convoluting whatever book, film or television show they can. Take a recent criticism of the new show Supergirl in which it was called “sexist” because of her name (girl) and the fact she seem concerned by such things as relationships with men. The show itself smartly ridiculed the problem with the name and shouldn’t the world’s most powerful women be allowed to pick the relationship she wants? When we are oft told to be tolerant and inclusive of everything, only to be told certain relationships are not okay. Is this not a red flag for someone’s agenda? The ultimate irony is that apparently a woman who can do anything is not woman enough.

Continue reading

Categories: Books, Critical Thinking, Fiction | Tags: , , , , , , , , , | Leave a comment

Finding Your Destiny Off Planet

Robert Ellsmore Grandon stifled a yawn…He was tired of life at twenty-four, he decided – tired and disillusioned and trapped…[he] yearned for action, adventure, romance – something that seemed to be gone in this world of the Twentieth Century.

That is how Otis Adelbert Kline’s novel Planet of Peril began.

And it was written in 1930.

We often think that our lives are unique to our time, but in many ways they are not. So were the fantastic adventures of Kline and his contemporary Edgar Rice Burroughs, at their foundation, a reflection of buried desires? In particular the desire not to be suppressed and molded by whichever social and political masterminds are currently in style? To not be drug into endless, mindless repetition? The rebellion against conformity and corruption?

Perhaps some think this is reading too much into the over-the-top adventures from sci-fi’s first Golden Era. On the other hand, those extreme adventures may also be reminders of how far we fall from our potential.

Read to be entertained. Read to get lost. Read to be inspired.

popoak

Categories: Books, Fiction | Tags: , , , , | Leave a comment

Safe Paths or Being Alive

Jack V. Matson writes in his book Innovate or Die that avoiding failure only leads to just that:

The safe paths are available. I can construct plans which avoid risks. But my spirit and soul would be dormant, eventually even die. I wanted to discover my most creative talents and ignite my imagination. I am an innovative human existing in the unknown, and moving in multiple paths which are loaded with peril, dead ends, and hardship. I have sufficiently adjusted to like the dark passageways. It’s the adventure of living, of being a curious, alive human being…Teddy Roosevelt said it best, “It is far better to dare mighty things, to win glorious triumphs, even though checkered by failure, than to rank with those poor spirits who neither enjoy much nor suffer much, because they live in the gray twilight that knows not victory or defeat.”

Finding your place in the Story isn’t always easy, but what is the alternative?

Categories: Uncategorized | Tags: , , , | Leave a comment

Blog at WordPress.com.